I’m working on a english writing question and need support to help me learn.
I wrote a research paper on my own and my professor commented on it:
There’s not yet a clear argument in support of the claims you make in the introduction and conclusion in the body of the paper. As you revise, go deeper into your analysis of the poems to support the main claim of the paper.
According to the comment, I need you to help me to revise this paper. (There is no need to modify the format of my original paper.You don’t have to rewrite the paper.)
My theme is:
The Greek gods are more folk and closely related to the life of the Greeks. Their humanity transcends divinity.
I use The epic of Gilgamesh, The Iliad, Ovids Metamorphoses as examples. (Dont use any other story as example, but you can add examples from those three stories.)
Paper Length: 6-8 pages, double-spaced, approximately 1800-2400 words