Paper should demonstrate thoughtful consideration of the ideas and concepts presented in the course by providing new thoughts and insights relating directly to this topic. Your response should reflect scholarly writing and current APA standards 7th edition.
The big thing I want you to focus on is, citing all of your work. Citing your sources helps to support your work. Without citations, it might as well be your opinion. Readers want to know what experts and research says.
1) Proper in-text citations. Please review the APA 7th edition for guidance.
2) Provide more examples in your work. Paint a picture, be more descriptive.